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An All New Kind of Masochism by ~VelvetRain:iconVelvetRain:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open




Life is no Hollywood
Not a soul gets a
second glance, without
beauty.

Here was the chasm
of decision, the
breaking point where the world
suddenly went black and white.
Success via beauty, or
failure?

Not a soul gets a
second glance, without
beauty.
Mirrors never lie, but
minds do.

One solution to an
appetite
for attention
is to taste it all
coming back up again.

Beauty...
Beautiful, isn't it?
©2006-2009 ~VelvetRain
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Submitted: March 27, 2006
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You can figure out what this is about on your own; please remember, though, that not all poetry comes from the author's own experience.
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~OhSoNaive:iconOhSoNaive: Mar 27, 2006, 5:06:41 PM
I really like this. A lot. Like...

A LOT.

I'm not sure quite why... but I REALLY like the way you wrote this.

Brilliant concept!

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~VelvetRain:iconVelvetRain: Mar 27, 2006, 5:07:39 PM
Thank you so much! Fresh from the notebook, m'dear. ^^

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Believe nothing, no matter where you read it or who has said it, not even if I have said it, unless it agrees with your own reason and your own common sense. -Buddha
~CrimsonRegret42:iconCrimsonRegret42: Mar 27, 2006, 5:13:58 PM
Wow.

It's pretty mind-boggling.

I love the format.

:+fave:
~AnImperfectCircle:iconAnImperfectCircle: Mar 29, 2006, 9:16:10 AM
I love the meaning behind it. Amazingly written.

Mirrors never lie, but
minds do.

-my favorite part

:D

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"I'm tough, Ambitious, and I know exactly what I want...If that makes me a bitch, okay."-Madonna
~Meiga-mi-meiga:iconMeiga-mi-meiga: Apr 2, 2006, 6:45:22 PM
Wow..I absolutely adore the image..>>..and the writing is dazzling as per usual..^^ I just love your concepts!

Here was the chasm
of decision, the
breaking point where the world
suddenly went black and white.

My absolute favorite part! :rose:

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:rose::pride::rose:
~VelvetRain:iconVelvetRain: Apr 2, 2006, 8:02:48 PM
Thank you, sweetness! ^^

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Believe nothing, no matter where you read it or who has said it, not even if I have said it, unless it agrees with your own reason and your own common sense. -Buddha
~morganasbane:iconmorganasbane: Jan 30, 2007, 8:53:43 AM
i love the title and the structure. the repetition makes me think of it being sung.

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snakes + plane = SNAKES ON A PLANE :w00t:

"I STICK IT IN LIKE IT'S INTENTIONAL"

BUNNIES NEED PORN, TOO! ;P

support my club! ~thatwhichlieshidden
~VelvetRain:iconVelvetRain: Jan 30, 2007, 9:18:13 AM
:hug:

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Believe nothing, no matter where you read it or who has said it, not even if I have said it, unless it agrees with your own reason and your own common sense. -Buddha
~xEnOniC:iconxEnOniC: Mar 15, 2007, 5:15:23 AM
gosh !! you are crazy !! :) love it !!

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I once had a guinea pig called Total Fucking Destruction. I thought he was hard as fuck until one day; he choked on a very small leaf and died.
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