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Dear Dr. Shrink

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I stepped outside the door and I
flew out of my mind because I
just thought you should know.

I told you everything I swore
that I would keep inside but I
just thought you should know.

I don't know where I am right now
I feel a little weightless and
I wonder if that's right.

New questions rise where old ones fell
I feel a little naked and
I wonder if that's right.

Am I being told what to feel?
If so, I guess, I think, I know
...it's better than what I'd had.

To see the picture on my own
instead of through a mottled lens
is better than going mad.
For my counselor. I wrote this basically ten seconds after I stepped out of her office today. It was an...unusual session.
The fifth stanza is a bit less awkward now. Thanks, to everybody who gave me advice!
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flesh-box's avatar
Very lovely. Great great great concept. It helps knowing where you came from as well.